"Stalker": A fanfic by demonesspaige

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"Stalker": A fanfic by demonesspaige

kathy025
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27 Jul 2012, 19:50 #1

This is one of my favorite one-shot fanfics from Wilhelmina Vandom's Fanfiction website. No magic, no guardians, no Kandrakar. Just a short bittersweet tale of mother and daughter.

The original story belongs to demonesspaige. It's a nice story, aimed to more mature readers though, but nothing explicit. I wrote a short alternate ending to it. Here's my first try to fanfic writing. Hope you guys enjoy!

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28 Jul 2012, 00:51 #2

I'll give this a read when I get back! I have to warn you though, the only books I've critiqued were the intellectually stimulating Goosebumps books.
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28 Jul 2012, 04:52 #3

LOL. I love Goosebumps. I remember reading them in 5th grade. :D
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29 Jul 2012, 08:50 #4

Wow, it was a lot more darker than I had thought it would be. It was very entertaining though; interesting to see how things could have happened if Thomas won.

Being from the U.S., the names threw me off a little :P
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30 Jul 2012, 06:47 #5

True, even if W.i.t.c.h. is originally Italian, the names of characters and places seem to be more American. I dunno why, but "Heatherfield" gives me a Beverly Hills-like kind of vibe. :)

This fanfic could be a bit more mature. According to the website, the fanfic author is 25 years old (at least when she wrote it, so yeah). "A Chance at Happiness", is a lot darker than "Stalker" and could be even depressing at times. It's a great read, also my favorite, but maybe not for the younger ones here. I'd say 16+ due to mature references though nothing explicit. Unfortunately, it's an unfinished short novel at Chap. 17 if I remember correctly.

For Stalker, I liked the justice of the good end, but decided to try also writing for a darker turn. Thanks for giving it a read! :D
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31 Jul 2012, 21:11 #6

I was about to blow it off as being ridiculously OOC, but then it was explained. Pretty brutal at certain points, which was interesting to read actually. Waaay too many name drops for me though.

Simultech sounds like a semiconductor company though, not a video game one :P
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02 Aug 2012, 06:29 #7

I'm not sure which issue (maybe the first or second saga), but I faintly remember Simultech being hinted as a gadget/tech company. That's why Will was the first to have a cellphone among her friends. Being a video game company is still in the realms of logic. :lol:
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