Final Chapter

hikari07
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Jun 2 2013, 04:36 AM #1

Awww. That was a nice ending, but I want more. I feel like the ending was rushed or something.

I was hoping to see Jack Hound again. I kinda find him cool. :D

Lui. He's so cute. XD


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Harumi
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Jun 5 2013, 09:26 AM #2

I thought the ending was pretty rushed too. I wanted a more of a gradual romance between Violet and Crow. And Renard... as if he was pretending to like Violet! I bet he really liked her for real but then wanted Crow and Violet to be happy together.

I thought Jack Hound died in the pit of flames? O>O
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hikari07
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Jun 5 2013, 11:49 AM #3

Yes, gradual romance. I would have liked to see how their relationship develops after they knew each other's feelings.

I also think Renard liked Violet for real.

Well, I was hoping he'd still be alive since his body was never found. And, I think dying in fire was a "lame" way to end a villain's life. He's even the main antagonist and he just died from fire.


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Dec 15 2015, 03:18 AM #4

Short Romance stories are always rushed which will frustrate people. But what can we do.

Love Liu, he looks like both his parents but since he grew up loved, never realized hardship yet since he is so young (and so spoil. poor kuchinawa and renard) . Also not being able to get away for a day is so funny.
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romance25
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Dec 15 2015, 06:08 PM #5

liu was cute, and I also thought that the ending was kinda rushed.
also I think renard liked her for real so well. :D
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May 29 2016, 04:05 AM #6

I naturally likes happy ending. so yeay!!! (turning blind eyes to the plotholes)
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