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when I read it a second time to my partner, I could see little areas I'd perhaps have altered, including that ending, slightly, downtoning it. Would love to have seen it "workshopped"! On the whole, however, I thought, quite marvelous. More than the sum of its words. And certain Pasang moments were enchanting, to me.
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