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I really like this: from Rattle's online pages

Osel
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3:34 AM - Dec 10, 2015 #1

http://www.rattle.com/poetry/elephant-d ... -jamieson/




The line with ..The children ride quietly/
is pure poetry magic.

 
I like what she says, also.
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Osel
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2:02 PM - Dec 13, 2015 #2

And this one, so elegantly stating the difficult to express.

http://www.rattle.com/poetry/vision-by-irene-wellman/
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