32.2 Two Philosopher Tankas

Slowlearner
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Joined: August 30th, 2017, 11:32 am

August 9th, 2018, 8:06 pm #1

All noble things are
as difficult as they're rare.
Spinoza said this,
that moral bondage results
when prompted by the unaware.

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It's the stillest words
that bring on the biggest storms.
Nietzsche scribbled this,
and those thoughts on a dove's feet
is what's needed to guide the world.
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Osel
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Joined: June 20th, 2007, 3:33 am

August 9th, 2018, 10:43 pm #2

bring ( correct? ) 
are ? ( thoughts,  what’s guided...)
i am a bit mystified by the obvious anomalies in the second one, in that you might 
have a greater plan behind them?

nice work overall
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