All noble things are
as difficult as they're rare.
Spinoza said this,
that moral bondage results
when prompted by the unaware.
It's the stillest words
that bring on the biggest storms.
Nietzsche scribbled this,
and those thoughts on a dove's feet
is what's needed to guide the world.
bring ( correct? )
are ? ( thoughts, what’s guided...)
i am a bit mystified by the obvious anomalies in the second one, in that you might
have a greater plan behind them?
nice work overall