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Slowlearner
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Joined: August 30th, 2017, 11:32 am

January 12th, 2018, 11:39 am #1



Transition

We join the stream each day,
though never yet in flight.
The flamingos will remain,
we shall feel more tonight,
our legs will please us again,
our hair now matches the red,
our bodies continue to slim.
We wait where light has bled,
feel it tinge our tinting skin,
watch the long limbs that pin
grace to the body, know the sky
is waiting, if we should fly.
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Billy Joe
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Joined: January 24th, 2010, 6:30 pm

January 12th, 2018, 7:56 pm #2

Like this a lot. Submit it.
"I hear the wind blow,
And I feel that it was worth being born
just to hear the wind blow."

~Fernando Pessoa, from “Uncollected Poems”
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Osel
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Joined: June 20th, 2007, 3:33 am

January 13th, 2018, 1:12 am #3

“our bodies continue to slim”  👌
that’s the best I could have seen... for this painting. do submit it
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toniclark
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Joined: May 5th, 2006, 6:47 pm

January 14th, 2018, 8:12 am #4

That's a strange painting. I wouldn't know what to make of it. I like what you've done! It makes the painting much more interesting to me. ;)

Yeah, I agree. Submit it.
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Slowlearner
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January 14th, 2018, 10:18 am #5

Thanks for the input and encouragement, guys.
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