21.6 Title Inside

Can you write a poem a day for seven days?

21.6 Title Inside

Slowlearner
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Joined: 30 Aug 2017, 15:32

12 Jan 2018, 16:39 #1



Transition

We join the stream each day,
though never yet in flight.
The flamingos will remain,
we shall feel more tonight,
our legs will please us again,
our hair now matches the red,
our bodies continue to slim.
We wait where light has bled,
feel it tinge our tinting skin,
watch the long limbs that pin
grace to the body, know the sky
is waiting, if we should fly.
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Billy Joe
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Joined: 24 Jan 2010, 23:30

13 Jan 2018, 00:56 #2

Like this a lot. Submit it.
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Osel
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13 Jan 2018, 06:12 #3

“our bodies continue to slim”  👌
that’s the best I could have seen... for this painting. do submit it
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toniclark
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14 Jan 2018, 13:12 #4

That's a strange painting. I wouldn't know what to make of it. I like what you've done! It makes the painting much more interesting to me. ;)

Yeah, I agree. Submit it.
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Slowlearner
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14 Jan 2018, 15:18 #5

Thanks for the input and encouragement, guys.
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