delmore @ Feb 5 2014, 03:49 AM wrote: You can't write a good lyric unless have to have something to say. But you won't know what you have to say until you write it.
Hmm... I guess he starts with a rythm, some accent.
"I want to come back as a wave that scatters among the bathers Go down as they come up for breathers splatter and spume at their ankles Make every body beautiful
I want to come back as a wave So always near, so out of reach So when they run back up the beach their glowing bodies fading home my salt will still be upon them …
I want to come back as a wave Regather forces, spend myself in Spring move in on estuaries Attend to the mating of stingrays Tidal lengthening days …