Let me just make a couple of comments:
1. Having it read like a "medical thriller" is not a good thing. Upton Sinclair did not write a "thriller." For example, when Larry attributes large sections of text to individuals as quotes (prior to the tape recordings) it damages the authenticity of his overall message. I mean, seriously, I can barely remember what my mom just told me. These allegations should have been handled with more professionalism.
2. Of course, the "medical thriller" aspect might have been an artistic decision by Scott. But then again, Scott also was the script supervisor for "Sex Files: Alien Erotica":http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0050031/
Well anyways, I'm still making a video regarding this whole situation. Though it might seem anti-Larry at first, I actually have no ill-will towards the guy. The Internet just turns me into a douchebag, and the videos I've made reflect that.
Plus, I understand there are much bigger things to worry about. So I'll wheel my audience in with Larry... and then I'll surprise them. Assuming, of course, anybody watches the damn thing
http://www.amazon.com/Stinky-Cheese-Oth ... 067084487X
Might be worth a read, sounds funny! So many books, so little time.
(sorry, my fingers thought enoons?i is Polish )