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May 1st, 2011, 9:57 pm #11

Mirabelle Nesa--blew me away. She died a warrior, she died fighting, and damn if it wasn't beautiful.

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May 2nd, 2011, 1:23 am #12

BKA: Josie Vernon for killing Sierra Manning

Wow. What a poignant way for that character to depart - and there was really no better way to do Sierra justice than by having Josie take her out. The touch Zombie added with her face at the end really brought the point home - and with feeling. The tension was palpable. It was a thoroughly enjoyable read.

BDA: Liz Polanski

Poetry in motion. Story wrote that scene with an elegance that most of us would have a hard time even touching. Her ability to craft her words into a character - more like a human being - is incredible. I'm absolutely jealous of her talent. Liz was an odd one to begin with, but in her death her character came to life - just as Story has as a writer. Breathtaking piece of work.

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May 2nd, 2011, 1:46 am #13

I just have one for this, as I don't think I can say anything more about Josie Vernon's kill that wasn't already said better than I could put it. Needless to say, it was wonderful and a BKA well-won, provided we don't suddenly have an upset.

BDA: Milo Taylor (Sean):
This post is proof that a lot can be said with only a small amount of words. It was a little gory, but not overly so. It was a little dramatic, but not too much. There was a really nice blend of elements that left the reader feeling empty in the best possible way by the end of the post. Milo wasn't a large figure on the island, and his send-off really just made the reality of the whole game hit home in a poignant way. Milo Taylor was just an ordinary kid. And his death was just an ordinary, hopeless death.

Congrats to everyone, though! I enjoyed a lot of the other deaths, and wish I could give extra mentions to Liz, Mirabelle, and Harun's especially.

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Guest

May 2nd, 2011, 2:04 am #14

I'm guessing that Josie's won BKA. Can't disagree with that logic, so I'm going to give her a vote.

For BDA, I'm giving the vote to Tiffany Chanders... Oh, wait. I've remembering that I can't vote for myself. Strike that.

BDA goes to Milo Taylor. There was one of two ways this death could have played out - (a) Milo's delusions continue with his final seconds having him dream up an ending where he is sent home and coddled by supermodels, or (b) the ending we were given - which I have to admit was the better choice of the two. Honestly, you have to feel for the guy. He gets the gift of self-awareness for two minutes before he gets his collar blown. That just hurts.

Somber Canine
Somber Canine

May 2nd, 2011, 4:20 am #15

Ha, poor Belle. I did try.

BKA: Josie Vernon
I feel I need to explain myself in spite of Clue's warning against critiques. At first I really wanted to pick another kill for BKA because my first impressions of the scene was that it was kind of sloppy and kind of abrupt. Except then I read it again and it hit me a little harder, and I read it a third time and it hit me harder still. It's the conclusion to an excellent story, and you can feel the thread of it through earlier threads--the mounting tension. It's a potent scene all on it's own, but as a conclusion to Sierra and Josie's story it's even better.

BDA: Liz Polanski
See, this is what I was worried about. I never, ever want to compete with story for anything because the girl kicks my ass every time. Any piece of writing anyone on the site has liked has come from one of our RPs, and it's impossible for me to argue that she's better. Everything I tried to put into my death, she did better, and faster--action, stream of consciousness, slow descent. You can feel Liz dying as story writes, and that makes her brief, flitting thoughts all the more poignant.

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May 2nd, 2011, 10:21 pm #16

(Could a mod delete the above post? I changed my vote)

BKA - Josie Vernon

Josie has always been a favorite for me. That's not why I'm voting for her - I'm voting for her because her kill has brought her back into the limelight for me. Zombie is such a skilled writer and it shows in this death. Not to mention, this was the perfect way to send off Sierra. A respected death for a respected character.

BDA - Liz Polanski

This is Story's best work by far. I could vote for Milo because I liked his character more and the death fit his character a hell of a lot better than most... but no, at the end of the day, she deserves this. I have always respected Story's writing, and this is just a new level. It's incredible.

Namira
Mr. Danya
Joined: May 28th, 2007, 12:31 pm

May 2nd, 2011, 10:28 pm #17

Inspected and done.

SotF: Mini - SCdoes a-rolling! - PV3 Prologue ongoing!
Draw Thread! - Pathfinder! - Writing Thread!
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13:58 Gianni Oh come on you broke someone's heart
13:59 Gianni you are proud, not embarrassed
13:59 Christian Yes
13:59 Christian Be proud
13:59 Christian Do we not all strive to break a human soul?
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Vincenzo/a 'Vinny' 'Enzo' Gatti | DO IT FOR THE VINE.
Toby 'Noodle' Andreasson | :|
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G008 - Kammy So'oialo | wants a new script
G062 - Becca Everett | was a damn superstar
G071 - Sunshine Cho Lee | trusted
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G026 - Rosalia Fiametta | Found it. | Walkie Talkies
G014 - Yelizaveta 'Bounce' Volkova | Out of here | Gasoline
B060 - Brock Mason | Thump. Thump |
G029 - Kristina 'Kris' Hartmann | Put Down. | Drama Bombs [∞], M79 Grenade Launcher [x6 grenades]
G117 - Jessie Anderson | Still Smiling | Faith
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May 2nd, 2011, 10:48 pm #18

BKA: Josie Vernon

BANDWAGON? Naw, I almost forgot this death happened until it was put up here for consideration. It was just tragic and I'm a sucker for euthanasia deaths (you know the way to my hear now). It was such a sad ending to Sierra but what made it even sadder was Josie's justification for her actions. And the horrified look on dead Sierra's face is gruesome. I love it.

BDA: Milo Taylor

You goofy weirdo, I will miss you. This was a great scene between Aaron urging on the death he knew would happen, Alieen hesitant and distraught and poor old Milo freaking out as he is made a sacrifice for Aaron's cause. I agree that with another poster that he was just an unlucky every-man who reacted like any of us would and it was a cracking scene to read. You dun good, Sean.


A slightly agitated Zebra
A slightly agitated Zebra

May 2nd, 2011, 10:59 pm #19

Typing really fast to get this done so excuse any typos :x

BKA: Without a doubt, Josie Vernon. It was a poignant end to the storyline of her and Thierra, was well written, and honestly in my opinion deserves it most.

BDA: Milo Taylor. Sean has managed to turn a joke character into one of my most favourite and imo well-rounded characters in the version. His death was utterly chilling in a "holy fuck I would not want to go out like that" way, and it's gotten me super interested for what happens next in the scene, so my vote goes t Milo.

karsk
karsk

May 3rd, 2011, 6:49 am #20

BKA: Josie Vernon. Before I actually get to Josie, I wanna talk a bit about one of my favorite SOTF deaths. Emma Babineaux was easily one of the best deaths in v3. It took a complicated relationship, toyed with it, coaxed every bit of emotion out of it that it possibly could, & the turned it on its head at the last minute. It was wonderfully paced & executed (& it seems the staff is as in love with it as I am, since it's the death we were presented with for the v4 prologue). Sierra's death is right up there with Emma in my favorites, and a brilliant companion to it at that. The details are a little different (we've got a much more sympathetic & a quieter, more subtle scene), but Chelsea plays with the idea of these characters' seemingly unbreakable bond and destroys it with the same sense of style that's present in Emma's exit. Chelsea's been a favorite of mine ever since Lulu Altaire, but this is by far the strongest writing I've ever seen her put out. It's a clear sign of how far she's come as a writer and how much she's grown into her own style, and it has me really, really excited to see where she goes from here.

& while I'm at it, I'd like to suggest that staff give this scene the Emma treatment & throw it on the v5 intro tape. I can't think of a better way to set the bar for next round.

BDA: Liz Polanski: Between Betsy & Chelsea, we were insanely spoiled on deaths this month. We had two of our best writers put out two of the best scenes we've seen from them. Honestly, we've been spoiled on deaths period: Sean has developed to much & so fast as a writer that it makes my head spin, Grim (possibly one of the most underrated writers we have) ended The Gully absolutely gorgeously with Belle's last stand, and the rest of the line-up is certainly nothing to sneeze at. But from the word go, Liz has been something really special. Betsy worked beautifully with everyone in the thread (including & especially Mr. Toben & his fabulous terrorists) and made sure she left us two for two on exciting & tightly-written escape attempts. More than that, she demonstrated that she really gets the spirit of the board. It was a little over-the-top, it was a stretch at times, but instead of bogging anything down, she used all of that to her advantage & it came together wonderfully. BDA or no, this is & will always be one of the key scenes that v4 is going to be remembered for.

With the gushing out of the way, there's something a little less pleasant I want to address. There's been a lot of negativity & resentment floating around Liz for a long time. It's completely undeserved. I like to imagine that this hasn't skewed the votes in any way, & I'm going to keep thinking that, because it's much nicer. But I do want to throw down on the sentiment a bit.

No, the science of the escape wasn't bulletproof. Yes, Liz did draw a lot of attention to herself in the process. There's plenty of room for legitimate criticism throughout Liz's plot. But the accusations of "hogging the spotlight" and the vitriol and disrespect towards Betsy and Liz have been, frankly, really disgusting. So I'd like to make the following very clear: there is no room for that kind of pettiness here. SOTF may be a competition, it may be a bit of a popularity contest on its worst days, but it's a community first. As a community, we need to be encouraging the writers who do crazy shit like this. We need to be building an environment where we can put ourselves out there like this. If we start shooting down our Betsys and encourage this toxic environment full of hostility and pettiness, then we're completely missing the point. We need a constructive & supportive community for the game to work. So, in the future, let's try to make sure we stick close to that. Otherwise, we really have no reason to be here.

I also want to note that I'm putting my real handle up on this for a reason. If you have an issue with what I've said here, please take it up with me personally. This isn't meant on an attack on any of the votes & it doesn't reflect anyone's opinions but my own.