This is probably an awful idea BUT SCIENCE BITCH.
Me and Naft are fusing to form the super mega critic.
You see what had happened was, me and naft we're scheming our usual night time schemes last night on chat, but then we had an actual good idea and we were all like:
But being that most of our late night schemes aren't very plausible/successful, we decided to sleep it off and see if it was still a good idea today and it totally may be:
While this is a new critique thread, we decided it'd only be fair if we still did the requested critiques we promised to do but haven't yet, so sorry for the long wait, but hey 2 for 1 deal:
With that, some RULES THAT YOU NEED TO FOLLOW FOR MOST EXCELLENCY
1) If you have a character that was critiqued by one of us and not the other, YOU MAY NOT RE-SUBMIT THAT CHARACTER FOR THIS THREAD.
2) If you've had a character that was already critiqued by both of us, it should be obvious that the above also applies here.
3) If you already have a character on one of our lists and they haven't been critiqued yet, you may not submit another character for right now. We appreciate your patience.
3.5) If you had a different character on each of our lists, well lucky you. You're still gonna get them c:
4) While we are still doing our old critiques, we live on the edge so we're allowing new submissions for critiquing, barring that they don't fit the above and you get them in before the 10 limit cap fills in. That's right, we're putting a cap in this ho.
5) We don't reserve for characters who don't exist.
6) You may not request characters that are not yours.
7) No characters that have only been in pre-game/sandbox.
- [+] spoiler
- Adonis Alba
- Maynard Hurst
- Brianna Battaglia
- Sharon Elizabeth
- Carmina Maliski
- Finn Grant
- Megan Emerson
- Katy Warren
- Sophie McDowell
- Owen Kay
- Ami Flynn
- Yukiko Sakurai
- Meera Stele
- Juhan Levandi
- Hansel Williams
- Chase Rodriguez
- [+] spoiler
- 1) Alice Gilman
2) Garret Wilde
3) Karen Ruiz (Mini)
4) Jasmine Stone (Mini)
5) Katarina "KK" Konipaski
6) Sarah Tan (V4)
7) Sean Mulcahy
8) Harun Kemal (V4)
9) Brian Meyerhold Callison (Mini)
10) Ray Gilbert
Do you have a favorite Persy and Naft adventure? Here they are listed below!
Episode 1: Took A Wrong Turn At Adonis.
Episode 2: Maynard We Have This Dance?
Episode 3: Aren't You Glad I Didn't Say Brianna?
Episode 4: Sharon Is Carin. But Not Really.
Episode 5: Where In The World Is Carmina Maliski? (Guest Starring Laurels)
Episode 6: Adventure Time With Finn and Us
Episode 7: Total Emerson
Episode 8: Warren Not So Peaceful
Episode 9: We Got The Moves Like McDowell
Episode 10: Owen To The Fact (Guest Starring The Alphabet) & (A Live Performance by The Jackson 5)
Episode 11: Hansel Held High (Un-Persona's Editorial and Commentary)
Episode 12: Ami Given Sunday (Guest Starring Dom)
Episode 13: Cardcaptor Sakurai
Episode 14: Meera Meera On The Wall
Episode 15: Takes Juhan To Know Juhan