Daniel Scott

PereGriNe
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PereGriNe
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Joined: November 26th, 2015, 7:33 pm

November 26th, 2015, 11:28 pm #1

Name: Daniel Scott
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Grade: 12
School: Cochise High School
Hobbies and Interests: Electronic music, Counter-Strike, piano, hockey, baseball, soccer, sci-fi, cars, webcomics

Appearance: Daniel is tall and slightly underweight. He has medium-length black hair which has a natural tuft at the front, allowing him to style it nicely. He has a somewhat round face, which altogether makes for a fairly handsome appearance. Girls who have crushes on him say that he has a very nice smile and pretty eyes. His eyes are usually green, but flecked with brown so that they become noticeably hazel in bright light. Under cloudy skies rather than sunlight, they dull to the point of being light grey.

Daniel dresses simply in T-shirts, sweaters, and jeans. His trademark item of clothing is Chuck Taylors, of which he owns many pairs. He owns numerous Monstercat tees, as well as more traditional graphic tees. He prefers black jeans to blue.

Biography: Daniel moved from Vancouver to Arizona at the age of 5. He is an only child with Ultra-Conservative parents, and is estranged from them due to differing views. His mother, Marge, is a stay-at-home Bible nut, who once told Daniel’s gay friend that he’d be squished between Satan’s buttocks if he didn’t repent. His father, Wendel, worked for the Vancouver city council and president of an association of gun nuts that was trying to get assault weapons available for all Canadian citizens. They moved from Vancouver to Kingman when the Liberal government was re-elected in Canada. Within a month, Wendel had bullied his way into a high-ranking position in the city-council. He ran for mayor of Kingman but lost because his priorities were a bit too anti-Mexican to get the Hispanic vote.

At the age of 12, Daniel was home alone while his parents were away on a vacation. In the middle of the night, an armed robber broke into his house, believing it to be empty. Daniel shot the robber with his father’s bedside gun, but not before sustaining a large knife wound on his arm. Since then, Daniel has been unable to even touch a gun due to the trauma of the experience. Even looking at one can set of a panic attack for him. Due to this, he has an intense fear of home invasion, to the point of paranoia. His room is booby-trapped at night, and he rarely gets a full-nights sleep due to fear.

Daniel is happy and well-adjusted other than the aforementioned paranoia, but is fairly cynical and jaded. He keeps to himself at school because he believes that nearly everyone there isn’t worth his time. He has a couple of close friends, whom he has deemed worthy, due to their intellect and worldviews for the most part. He has no desire to make friends outside of the ones he already has. If he doesn’t know you, or doesn’t like you, He’ll tend to be cold and rude, but if you’re his friend, he’s very kind, warm, and fun. Daniel doesn’t work very hard in school, doing just enough to get by. He doesn’t believe most of what he is learning is important. Despite this, he is very intelligent, boasting an I.Q. of 142.

Daniel is an amateur EDM producer, and listens to a lot as well. He shuns country music. When not making music, He plays Counter-Strike or the piano (at which he achieved the highest achievement level in BC), watches sports or sci-fi films on TV, or reads webcomics. His parents enrolled him in a Karate class when he was very young, but he was miserable at it and only achieved the rank of Yellow belt before giving it up. They also took him to firing ranges, but he didn’t enjoy shooting and after the incident with the robber, he wasn’t mentally able to.

Daniel is a realist. He looks for the rational solutions in every situation, and doesn’t believe in magic or the supernatural. He is not religious, but doesn’t hold others beliefs against them. He enjoys a well-fought argument, especially if it’s on the topic of politics or religion. He loathes bullies, often standing up for weaker kids at school if they’re being harassed. He tries to stand up for what he believes is right, but since he is somewhat selfish, he’ll put his own safety first if it comes to blows. The exception to this is if he’s trying to protect a girl he loves, or a very close friend.

Advantages: Due to his extensive piano training and competitive gaming, he is incredibly good with his hands; He can untie difficult knots with ease, can wield knives or other such small weapons with skill, and overall has a steady hand. He has good reflexes. In addition, his spatial and kinetic intelligence is very good, and his hearing and sight are above average. A natural distrust of others makes him non-gullible and wary. He’s got a bit of gun training if he can get around his aversion to guns. Can set simple booby traps and alarms with the correct tools. Very loyal to his friends.
Disadvantages: Very little Social skills. He’s not good at picking up cues, or “tells”. It works both ways, too: He’s a terrible liar, and is no good at bartering or convincing others. Also, an extreme aversion to guns to the point where he cannot even touch one. He will NOT kill a friend or someone he loves. His loyal nature is an easy target for betrayal, provided you can get him to trust you.
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Ruggahissy
Mr. Danya
Joined: June 10th, 2010, 2:07 am

December 17th, 2015, 10:04 pm #2

Apologies for the wait on this one. Leaving a note that I'll do this one tonight
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- Today at 8:38 PM
imagine this happening in life
and you pissed off a cop and he made you live with some incontinent sodafreak

05:57 NotAFlyingToyYou would not kill a policeman
05:57 NotAFlyingToyYou would not steal his helmet
05:57 NotAFlyingToyYou would not defecate in his helmet and mail it to his grieving family.
05:57 NotAFlyingToyYou would not steal it again

17:06 Ruggawork An orison is a prayer
17:07 trash i don't know why i thought it was a bird
17:07 trash who looks at random ass words and thinks "huh what does that mean? whatever it's probably a bird"

14:11 Kalopsia I HEARD FURRIES AND I CAME AS FAST AS I COULD.
14:11 Imehal Lovely.
14:11 Imehal Read that again.

20:16Outfoxd I SAID I'M TAKIN IT BACK FROM THE SALTINE ESTABLISHMENT
20:16Meeemz Half the drag queens on Drag Race would beg to differ.
20:16Outfoxd EVERYONE KNOWS ALL DANCE CAME FROM AFRICA
20:17Outfoxd YOU CRACKAS NEED TO PUT SOME CHEESE ON YOSELF AND GO SIT ON A SNACK TRAY SOMEWHERE

21:07craft i
21:07craft am a fan of blowjbs.
21:07craft nods sagely
21:07Rugga ?
21:07Rugga Does that mean you get a lot of them or give a lot?
21:07craft yes
21:07craft wait
21:07Rugga ....



22:31Mimi THATS WHAT I THPGUTH
22:31Mimi THOUGHTU
22:31mudkip MIMI'S TURN
22:31Ruggahissy Thougt
22:31Ruggahissy THOUGHT
22:31Mimi HOUGHT
22:31Ruggahissy We got it
22:31Mimi THOUGHT
22:31Ruggahissy WE GOT IT
22:31Mimi we did good
22:32Mimi we're a good team

22:46 Meeemz I love dicks, though
22:46 Meeemz er
22:46 Rugga Sig quote
22:46 NaftUm
22:46 Meeemz dicky characters
22:46 Meeemz GOD NO

19:45 BikrikiI am pretty sure we can built a bridge to jerking off

00:11 Mimi DOESN'T FOAM BREAK EASILY
00:11 Ruggahissy Not if you wrap it in duct tape
00:11 MurderWeasel There's a fiberglass core.
00:12 MurderWeasel And the foam is some special sort you buy directly from another dimension using souls as currency or something.
00:12 Ruggahissy.........

14:42 Bikriki JA! Stick it in ze boot!
14:43 Rugga I LOVE THIS KID
14:43 Bikriki adds that to list of sexual euphemisms
14:43 Skyler_Phone You have a list?
14:43 Bikriki <.<
14:43 Bikriki >.>
14:43 Bikriki No...

Victoria says:
Oh wait, I totally forgot to tell you last night because I was busy whoring
Mimi says:
STORY
OF
MY
LIFE

16:42 KamiKaze I've always wondered what using a fleshlight feels like.
16:42 KamiKaze Too bad I'm not special because God didn't give me a penis. ):

17:46 Dom LET JESUS INTO YOUR HEART, NOT YOUR VAGOO

Ruggahissy this dress makes me feel like I should be having tea with the mad hatter. Not getting felt up by drunk Germans
Dom don't let them go down the rab-
Ruggahissy BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Dom SO WORTH IT

09:51 Vicky We did a good job, didn't we, Meemz?
09:51 Mimi not really, no

03:19 GeneralGoose*BUT HE'S GONNA THINK IT'S A SPOON. OR MY PENIS. WHICH IT ISN'T*

23:15 Cluevara ICE CREAM MAKES YOU FAT YOU LARDY LARD BUTT.


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Jonah Heartsgrave: If you need to talk I'll listen.
Lori Martin: You're so stuck up.
Tirzah Foss: Let's have some fun.
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v6
Caleb Diamond: Silly sacrificer
Hazel Jung: Abandoned actress
v5
Amaranta Montalvo: Pageant Winner
Michelle Wexler: Vegetarian sweetheart
Paris Ardennes : Scheming holy man

v4
Ethan Kent : The smartest jerk
Sally Connelley: Dainty meanie
Nick LeMonde : Eternal optimist
Isabel Guerra: Sad little girl
Autumn O'Leary: Lonely redhead
Mary-Ann Warren: Crumbling romantic
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PereGriNe
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PereGriNe
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Joined: November 26th, 2015, 7:33 pm

December 30th, 2015, 1:40 am #3

I don't want to be rude or pushy, but...Am i going to get an evaluation on this?
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MK Kilmarnock
Mr. Danya
Joined: April 14th, 2009, 10:12 pm

December 30th, 2015, 2:56 am #4

I will either spur Ruggahissy to take care of this tonight or I will take over after consuming vast quantities of alcohol. I would like to apologize on behalf of the entire staff team; the holiday season is very busy for all of us and we each have our own lives to lead, but try our hardest to allocate duties so that our members don't get left behind.

I'll be sure this issue is resolved later tonight and will get back to you in staff PM.
[+] Spoiler
Jerry Fury - The man, the myth, the legend
Coleen Reagan - The girl who half-loved the world
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V5 Roster:
Cody Patton : That bitch.
Sean Mulcahy : The world was kind to reprieve him of his fear...
Jessica Sanders: She hoped it would be quick...
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20:17Sideliner:Toben and Ricky are like a sibling version of the Joker and Batman, only Batman is just as much of a mass murderer. He just hides it better.
19:58LaurelsHow does your dick smell like Fritos?
14:36 MimiI THOUGHT YOU GUYS WERE FRIENDS > 14:36MimiI THOUGHT YOU REALLY LICKED HER
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MK Kilmarnock
Mr. Danya
Joined: April 14th, 2009, 10:12 pm

December 30th, 2015, 10:02 am #5

Hey there, PereGriNe. First off, let me apologize again for the massive delays. In light of that, I'll make this as quick and painless as possible.

Here are the fixes Daniel needs before he can be accepted into pregame:

- An exact height and weight in the appearance section
- A birth date (V6 takes place in the late spring/early summer of 2015, so plan accordingly)
- Little tonal issues should be fixed. Of particular note is the description of Daniel's mother Marge which, while entertaining, isn't exactly appropriate for a profile which should be representative of an official document, bored terrorists or not.
- Maybe a bit of an explanation as to where Daniel learned to use a gun (even though said knowledge isn't used again after the burglary incident). If he was taken to the shooting ranges before the incident occurred, the profile should be structured to show that. For that matter, did the robber survive?
- His interest in cars is not mentioned anywhere in the profile. Ditto baseball, soccer and hockey.
- All advantages and disadvantage should be in complete sentences.
- There is a glaring contradiction in Daniel's advantages/disadvantages. His skill with a gun is listed as an advantage 'if he can get around his aversion', where his disadvantage states an aversion that prevents him from touching a gun. I can reason what you meant here, but the powerful aversion really should counter any chances of this being an advantage. Furthermore, if Daniel hasn't so much as touched a gun in 5 years, he's highly unlikely to be any good with one now.
- Why are his hearing and eyesight above average? Has this ever been noted in medical reports? This should probably be in the biography somewhere.
- How did Daniel learn to set up booby traps?
- There are some capitalization errors, particularly 'Ultra-Conservative' and 'Very little Social Skills'. Sweep the profile for little errors such as these. I will be on the look out for them next time.
- Finally, when you can, try to sneak in some supplemental details that could tell us more about Daniel. Particularly, does he have any fondness for his old home that he left behind as a young kid? Does he interact with others better outside of school rather than in it? What courses does he like? Does he find school too easy for him, or is it a decent challenge that he'd focus on rather than socializing? What's his favorite subject, or his least favorite?

Let me know when you've made these changes. I think you'll find me suitably prompt in my response.
[+] Spoiler
Jerry Fury - The man, the myth, the legend
Coleen Reagan - The girl who half-loved the world
[+] Spoiler
V5 Roster:
Cody Patton : That bitch.
Sean Mulcahy : The world was kind to reprieve him of his fear...
Jessica Sanders: She hoped it would be quick...
[+] Spoiler
20:17Sideliner:Toben and Ricky are like a sibling version of the Joker and Batman, only Batman is just as much of a mass murderer. He just hides it better.
19:58LaurelsHow does your dick smell like Fritos?
14:36 MimiI THOUGHT YOU GUYS WERE FRIENDS > 14:36MimiI THOUGHT YOU REALLY LICKED HER
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PereGriNe
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Joined: November 26th, 2015, 7:33 pm

December 30th, 2015, 11:15 pm #6

MK Kilmarnock wrote:Hey there, PereGriNe. First off, let me apologize again for the massive delays. In light of that, I'll make this as quick and painless as possible.

Here are the fixes Daniel needs before he can be accepted into pregame:

- An exact height and weight in the appearance section
- A birth date (V6 takes place in the late spring/early summer of 2015, so plan accordingly)
- Little tonal issues should be fixed. Of particular note is the description of Daniel's mother Marge which, while entertaining, isn't exactly appropriate for a profile which should be representative of an official document, bored terrorists or not.
- Maybe a bit of an explanation as to where Daniel learned to use a gun (even though said knowledge isn't used again after the burglary incident). If he was taken to the shooting ranges before the incident occurred, the profile should be structured to show that. For that matter, did the robber survive?
- His interest in cars is not mentioned anywhere in the profile. Ditto baseball, soccer and hockey.
- All advantages and disadvantage should be in complete sentences.
- There is a glaring contradiction in Daniel's advantages/disadvantages. His skill with a gun is listed as an advantage 'if he can get around his aversion', where his disadvantage states an aversion that prevents him from touching a gun. I can reason what you meant here, but the powerful aversion really should counter any chances of this being an advantage. Furthermore, if Daniel hasn't so much as touched a gun in 5 years, he's highly unlikely to be any good with one now.
- Why are his hearing and eyesight above average? Has this ever been noted in medical reports? This should probably be in the biography somewhere.
- How did Daniel learn to set up booby traps?
- There are some capitalization errors, particularly 'Ultra-Conservative' and 'Very little Social Skills'. Sweep the profile for little errors such as these. I will be on the look out for them next time.
- Finally, when you can, try to sneak in some supplemental details that could tell us more about Daniel. Particularly, does he have any fondness for his old home that he left behind as a young kid? Does he interact with others better outside of school rather than in it? What courses does he like? Does he find school too easy for him, or is it a decent challenge that he'd focus on rather than socializing? What's his favorite subject, or his least favorite?

Let me know when you've made these changes. I think you'll find me suitably prompt in my response.
Am I allowed to have had him kill someone? I know there was a rule against prior killing, but I thought it might be an interesting exception. If not, yeah, he survived.
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MK Kilmarnock
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Joined: April 14th, 2009, 10:12 pm

December 31st, 2015, 12:25 am #7

That rule stands.

Remember not to respond until all requested edits have been made.
[+] Spoiler
Jerry Fury - The man, the myth, the legend
Coleen Reagan - The girl who half-loved the world
[+] Spoiler
V5 Roster:
Cody Patton : That bitch.
Sean Mulcahy : The world was kind to reprieve him of his fear...
Jessica Sanders: She hoped it would be quick...
[+] Spoiler
20:17Sideliner:Toben and Ricky are like a sibling version of the Joker and Batman, only Batman is just as much of a mass murderer. He just hides it better.
19:58LaurelsHow does your dick smell like Fritos?
14:36 MimiI THOUGHT YOU GUYS WERE FRIENDS > 14:36MimiI THOUGHT YOU REALLY LICKED HER
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MK Kilmarnock
Mr. Danya
Joined: April 14th, 2009, 10:12 pm

January 14th, 2016, 7:42 pm #8

This character biography has had no alterations for more than two weeks and has been put in the abandoned characters forum. This profile is eligible for resubmission by the handler upon alterations requested by the staff.
[+] Spoiler
Jerry Fury - The man, the myth, the legend
Coleen Reagan - The girl who half-loved the world
[+] Spoiler
V5 Roster:
Cody Patton : That bitch.
Sean Mulcahy : The world was kind to reprieve him of his fear...
Jessica Sanders: She hoped it would be quick...
[+] Spoiler
20:17Sideliner:Toben and Ricky are like a sibling version of the Joker and Batman, only Batman is just as much of a mass murderer. He just hides it better.
19:58LaurelsHow does your dick smell like Fritos?
14:36 MimiI THOUGHT YOU GUYS WERE FRIENDS > 14:36MimiI THOUGHT YOU REALLY LICKED HER
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