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Myst modification 2

Joined: March 16th, 2018, 6:06 pm

July 12th, 2018, 1:20 pm #1

I am requesting a modification for my character, Myst Levon.

Link: http://w11.zetaboards.com/Pokemon_Godai ... 0529696/1/
Type: Update
Requesting: change to pokemon, inventory, AP, Exp, dians
Changes: AP +Seeing the Sights: 3, AP +Making Friends: 5 AP, +To Be the Best: 3 AP, +TLC: 5 AP. exp +5 [3 to cyndaquil, 1 to seedot, 1 to comfey.] inventory: pokeball -2. dians +620
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Trainer Profile
Character Name: Myst Levon

Gender: Female

Age: 20

Trainer Class: Lone Wolf

Height: 5'8"

Weight: 150lbs


Hair Color & Style: Her hair is long, like down to the lower back, straight, and flat naturally dark brown hair. It's usually worn so that it hangs flat, sometime gets pulled back into a ponytail to keep it off the neck or out of the face. She never uses anything like dyes or hairsprays.

Eyes: She has dark brown eyes that appear to have brown lines running straight from the pupil to the outside encircling the pupil, with a few lighter brown flecks here and there. They are about the height of a Clamperl pearl, and then more flat than rounded. They are spaced evenly a natural distance from the nose, with eyebrows an inch above that are not thin but not too thick and brown.

Clothing/Accessories: She is always seen in a normal T-shirt and jeans [long baggy jeans with huge pockets] with a belt to keep them up. She has a few different T-shirts and a couple pairs of jeans that she usually changes when needed, though note probably less often than she should. She doesn't let them get to smelling bad though. She also has a Pokemon sweater that has features of a shiny Umbreon: the rings, ears, and tail; that is tied around the waist when not being worn. During cold winters she has a heavier jacket to wear, which only adds to the weight of her backpack. She carries a school-like backpack, college-sized, that holds a laptop, her current book being read during down time because she reads a lot, a sketchbook, pencils, colored pencils, pens, sharpies, basic survival tools, a music player with headphones, empty PokeBalls, and her Pokemon journal. In her huge pockets, she keeps the Pokedex, current occupied PokeBalls, and the town map. On her wrists, a hair binder on one side, a long-ish shoelace looped around the other side and the Holocaster. around neck, a Typhlosion-charm necklace. She really hates dressing in "nice" clothes such as dresses and the like, or outfits the look professional. Basically any outfit that isn't made comfortably. She avoids those outfits whenever possible; hence she never carries a "nice" outfit when traveling.

General Appearance: She rounded face that is usually looking like it's void of emotion; a completely straight mouth, resting and almost giving off a voidish-depressive vibe eyes, resting eyebrows leaving her forehead completely flat and unmarked. But she can be very expressive when actually feeling; her eyes can get very bright and shiny and she smiles when she's happy which is most often around her Cyndaquil. When scared her eyes shine in a different way that can be interpreted as fear by anything watching. When confused she gets a raised eyebrow look in which she always raises both, as she can't really raise them one at a time, that some people find amusing. This embarrasses her so she tries her hardest to pretend she's not confused even when she is. Lastly, if embarrassed, her cheeks get bright red and eyes again shine differently in a way that shows embarrassment. Many people say she appears 16-17 when she's actually 20. A first impression would say she's quiet, possibly uncaring, and unrevealing as to whether she'd be friendly if approached. She usually stands leaning forward a bit to compensate the backpack, otherwise she has a thin build, and a tattoo of an Umbreon on the front of her right hip.


Hometown: East Godai: Scurarte Town.

Personality: She is usually quiet and likes to stay to herself with her own Pokemon and her book. She is of few words, mainly because she never knows what to say. Other people remain a mystery unless they approach her and talk first. It's hard for her to consider most people friends. However, if she makes a human friend, she can be really fun, humorous, and can really talk about deep subjects for ages. To think of someone as a friend, they would usually share her interests, and agree with her on a lot of subjects.

Her ideas of deep subjects are things like politics, religion, death, morals, the meaning of life, 42. Her political beliefs she tries not to talk about because although she has beliefs about political subjects, politics itself bores her. She doesn't know what to think about religion, she's always believed in some kind of higher power, but never felt the need for, like, worship or fall-on-your-knees praise and whatnot. She is at a point where she considers every legend to be true in some form, so while she doesn't do worship, she refuses to disbelieve anything.
As much as she doesn't seem to like most people, she still believes in respecting them in conversation and treating others as she would want them to treat her. But, if someone mistreats her, she isn't afraid to snap back... she's just a little afraid to stick around afterwards in case they get aggressive toward her, so she often will clap back, and then turn tail and run until she's sure she's not being followed.

Her world view, shaped a lot by parents and teachers but also by the way pokemon act, is that everyone is headed for the same road on different paths, including people and Pokemon, so it matters to stop and consider the little things along the way. The important things to her are her family, of which she considers her Pokemon a part, friendship, which encompasses all Pokemon as well as the few select humans she might enjoy talking to if they initiated contact, and then respect and trust, and then her attachment to her material things.

Things like bullying make her "tick" and she would try to intervene if she thought it wouldn't endanger herself. One of her strengths is gauging situations like that. Another is her friendship with her Pokemon, although she has a weakness in that aspect as well. She would break under a situation where her Pokemon was threatened. To relax she does things she likes such as reading, research, or napping. She doesn't know exactly what she wants in life except to have lots of Pokemon friends. So she knows she wants to travel someday, but not who with or when exactly, or if she wants more than that. She believes her weaknesses define her, as she doesn't think she could improve them at the moment. But her strengths will help get her where she needs to go.

She is partial to fire-type for their fiery energy and warmth and to dark-type Pokemon for their cool almost serenity and gets excited when she sees one of either type. She has done lots of research due to being quiet and shy and not wanting to do anything else, and therefore knows most basic information on the Pokemon up until the 6th generation, the most recently discovered. However, she does continue to do research on the new ones as well during down time if she doesn’t feel like reading or sleeping. She also loves Eevee for its adaptability. She also loves sleep and takes naps frequently in the forests or at home.

History: She was born to an average family, with enough money for access to basic needs such as food and a home and clothes and whatnot and some new technology, basically a desktop computer and her own laptop. She always had a better relationship with her mom than her dad, because her mom was more understanding about things she did and the mental illnesses she formed around 7, such as depression and anxiety, but her dad saw every little hindrance as an act of defiance. This resulted in her spending time outside with the Pokemon a lot. Although she went outside before her mental illness if she felt she was being unfairly disciplined, which being a child wasn't always rational reason. She never ran away from home, but just walked to the edge of the backyard, where the forest began, as they lived close to it. She discovered that Pokemon were not as hard to talk to as other people, and thus always loved Pokemon more than humans. This was helped along by the fact that if she was upset by anything her parents said and she'd run out of the house to be away from them for a while, especially if she was ever crying, the Pokemon would come to her and make her feel better just by being there. At first only one was brave enough to approach her, but when others saw how she treated that one, with respect and friendship, others followed suit. When she had become friends with a lot of the ones living around where she lived she spent a lot of time around them whenever she was allowed. At a fairly young age, around 5, she befriended without catching most of the forest Pokemon living around her house, and they helped a lot when things like her depression came along.

When she was old enough to learn how to work her own computer, around 7, she began researching all the Pokemon. She started really liking what she saw in fire types: usually heated personalities, warmth in their bodies, and often formed very strong bonds with their trainers. She became partial to them. She decided that when she got a starter, it would be the fire one if she couldn’t find a dark one she liked better. She fell in love with Cyndaquil after researching it. It was an adorable little fire mouse that grew into an epic fire beast. She would definitely choose that one if it was an option.

In school, she stayed to herself. She made one friend that she shared a lunch table with, but that was really it, and that only lasted as long as she was in school, because as soon as she was out of school she had no real reason to keep in touch, and her friend thought the same way about keeping in touch. Because she was quiet, she wasn't bullied, however she was taught about bullying and disliked the idea. She formed her own opinion that other people should be treated with the same kind of respect she gave her Pokemon friends.

At 12, she acquired the Cyndaquil she wanted. This made her a happier person as a whole, because she liked that she now had a Pokemon she could always talk to, even in the house. As a tween, she had researched knew about most normal Pokemon and started researching the legendary Pokemon. She really likes all of them and wants to seek out some of them one day. It’s on her dream list; though she doubts she will actually encounter one.

As an early teen, like 14-15, she got rebellious due to mood changes probably because of her mental illness, but around 17 she started liking her family again, at least her mom mostly, and stopped insisting she only be seen on her own. At her current age of 20, she’s been friendly with her Cyndaquil for quite some time, despite not having it battle. They are best friends and she never goes anywhere without her Cyndaquil as well as her backpack and things.

Some time ago she discovered it was incredibly useful and helpful to keep a hair binder on one wrist as a bracelet so she could tie her hair up whenever she wanted, and a shoelace on the other side which she found all sorts of uses for as she went places, but she has never been confident enough to strike out and leave to explore completely on her own yet, but she feels the day is coming.

She has now struck out on her own. She went first to the nearest forest, where she encountered a strange child. She is now in Kotoba City.

Inventory
Dians: 2,082

Items:
3x Pokéball

Key Items:
PokéDex
Journal
Holocaster
Trainer Advancement
Advancement Points: 21
5/25
3/15
5/15
3/15
5/25
Tier 0:
Pokemon
Total EXP Gained: 9
Pokemon

Cyndaquil
Caught at Level 5
Gender: Male
Type: Fire
Ability: Blaze
Height: 1'8"
Weight: 17.4lbs
Health: Scrawny
EXP Rate: Medium slow
EXP Gauge: 13/15
EXP Gained: 7
Level: 8
Division: D8
Total Stats: 88
  • Attack: 18
  • Defense: 17
  • Sp. Attack: 17 (20%)
  • Sp. Defense: 17
  • Speed: 19 (22%)
Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. leer
1. tackle
6. Smokescreen

Item: none yet


Seedot
Caught at level 6
Gender: Male
Type: Grass
Ability: Chlorophyll
Height: 1' 8"
Weight: 8.8 lbs
Health: Scrawny
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: 9/10
EXP Gained: 1
Level: 6
Division: D10
Total Stats: 54
  • Attack: 5
  • Defense: 17 (31%)
  • Sp. Attack: 7
  • Sp. Defense: 20
  • Speed: 5
Vitamins used: none
Moveset:
1. Bide
3. Harden

Item: None yet

Comfey
Caught at Level 7
- 6%
Gender: Male
Type: Fairy
Ability: Flower Veil
Height: 0' 4"
Weight: 0.7 lbs
Health: Low
EXP Rate: Fast
EXP Gauge: 12/14
EXP Gained: 1
Level: 7
Division: D5
Total Stats: 98
  • Attack: 7
  • Defense: 27
  • Sp. Attack: 20
  • Sp. Defense: 24 [23+1] (23%)
  • Speed: 21 (21%)
Vitamins used: none
Moveset:
1. Helping Hand
1. Vine Whip
1. Flower Shield
4. Leech Seed
7. Draining Kiss

Item: None yet

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Journal
Adventure Log

Myst's Beginning - 4 EXP, 461, 5 AP TLC
An Unexpected encounter - 5 EXP, 621, Seeing the Sights: 3 AP, Making Friends: 5 AP, To Be the Best: 3 AP, TLC: 5 AP,

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Myst Levon • Lone Wolf • Total EXP Gained: 4 • Dians: 2,082 • Location: Kotoba City, East Godai
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Cyndaquil • male • Level 8 • EXP Gained 7
Health: Scrawny
Attack: 16
Sp. Attack: 15
Defense: 15
Sp. Defense: 15
Speed: 16

Seedot • male • Level 6 • EXP Gained 1
Health: Scrawny
Attack: 5
Sp. Attack: 7
Defense: 17
Sp. Defense: 20
Speed: 5

Comfey • male • Level 7 • EXP Gained 1
Health: Scrawny
Attack: 7
Sp. Attack: 27
Defense: 20
Sp. Defense: 24
Speed: 21
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Joined: October 5th, 2015, 5:03 am

July 19th, 2018, 1:55 am #2

Heya Mste, sorry for the wait! This mostly looks solid, but I'd double check the formatting and spelling on your preview, since I saw a few typos in the Pokemon section, and the Adventure Log seems to just be showing the source code instead of being formatted right. Once those things are fixed you should be good to go~
Benjamin Hobbes • Cameraman • Total EXP Gained: 51 EXP • Dians: 1856 • Location: Skytouch Forest
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JC • Male • Level 12 • 26 EXP
Health: Low
Attack: 31 (29%)
Sp. Attack: 17
Defense: 31 (29%)
Sp. Defense: 17
Speed: 12
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Alfred • Male • Level 12 • 25 EXP
Health: Intermediate
Attack: 25 (18%)
Sp. Attack: 35
Defense: 24
Sp. Defense: 27
Speed: 33 (23%)
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Joined: March 16th, 2018, 6:06 pm

July 23rd, 2018, 12:55 am #3

ok I've been working how's that?
Myst Levon • Lone Wolf • Total EXP Gained: 4 • Dians: 2,082 • Location: Kotoba City, East Godai
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Cyndaquil • male • Level 8 • EXP Gained 7
Health: Scrawny
Attack: 16
Sp. Attack: 15
Defense: 15
Sp. Defense: 15
Speed: 16

Seedot • male • Level 6 • EXP Gained 1
Health: Scrawny
Attack: 5
Sp. Attack: 7
Defense: 17
Sp. Defense: 20
Speed: 5

Comfey • male • Level 7 • EXP Gained 1
Health: Scrawny
Attack: 7
Sp. Attack: 27
Defense: 20
Sp. Defense: 24
Speed: 21
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