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Tavile
Tavile

March 8th, 2006, 5:03 am #1


a shave and two bits
I think the Americans said
it’s hot in Melbourne tonight
I don’t care about tennis
but I’m watching it on my tv

I’ll get a haircut from the Vietnamese barber
tomorrow, it was Australia Day today
in Footscray, and bushfires were building tornadoes
in the sky, he trims the hair out of my ears

the Greek Cypriot guy won
and Melbourne fell in love with taramasalata
all over again, it was so hot this afternoon
I went with my daughter to Sunshine
to watch a snow-bound Christmas movie
at the cinema complex
the Americans are expert at making us weep artificially
a lot of swearing on the train, because the western suburbs hurt
flags can’t make a country
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Anonymous
Anonymous

March 8th, 2006, 5:44 am #2

Not dissin' or NEthing but is this original?
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tavile
tavile

March 8th, 2006, 5:59 am #3

yes indeed!
it's a original piece!!
I just wrote it !
do u like it.
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Anonymous
Anonymous

March 9th, 2006, 7:21 am #4

I loved it! More Power to you, keep 'em coming!!
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