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Lost Emerald

TheEdgeOfForever
Conqueror of the Sootopolis Gym
Conqueror of the Sootopolis Gym
Joined: April 10th, 2010, 12:51 am

July 22nd, 2011, 6:25 pm #1

Hey! Welcome to my new run! I delayed the start of this a bit because I was working on my hack (Here , play it!), but here we are now.

As the title says, this is an Emerald run, and the rules are:

Rules:

1. May only catch the first Pokemon you see in a new area (after getting Pokeballs). Shinies are the only exception.
2. If the first Pokemon you see is of the same evolution line than a Pokemon you have already caught, then you can catch the next Pokemon you see (dupes clause).
3. If a Pokemon faints, it's dead and will be boxed forever.
4. Pokemon can't be boxed unless they die or unless they are caught when the team is full.
5. If a Pokemon must be withdrawn from the box, it has to be selected randomly.
6. SET mode!

This is a bit similar to what Notepad and others do, but I allow myself to box extra Pokemon. Why I am using these weird rules will be explained in the story. So anyway, let's begin!
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Part 1: Lost.
Part 2: A Fighter.
Part 3: The Big Fan.
Part 4: Petalburg and Mysteries.
Part 5: The Others.
Part 6: The Beauty and the Beast.
Part 7: Special.
Part 8: The Good Guys.
Part 9: The Letter.
Part 10: The Bug Bros.
Part 11: Reunion?
Part 12: The Constant.
Part 13: The Big Smash.
Part 14: First Loss.
Part 15: The Escape.
Part 16: Uza's Beam.
Part 17: The One in Charge.
Part 18: Howl at the Sky.
Part 19: A Trainer's Past.
Part 20: L for Loser.
Part 21: The First Solution.
Part 22: The Queen of Fortree.
Part 23: Uza's Cold Beam.
Part 24: The Bug Bros - Part 2.
Part 25: Breaking Blue.
Part 26: The Torturer.
Part 27: Of Calm and Desperate Minds.
Part 28: Second in Command.
Part 29: Corruptible - Part 1.
Part 30: Corruptible - Part 2.
Part 31: The Last Struggle.
Part 32: The Return.
Part 33: The Escape - Part I.
Part 34: The Escape - Part II.
Part 35: The Escape - Part III.
Part 36: Finally Home.
Part 37: Across Time - Part I.
Part 38: Across Time - Part II.
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#1: Lost.



A boy had just woken up in a dark place. The sound of silence was really hurting his ears... He seemed oddly confused by it.

Suddenly, he heard a voice...



"My name's Professor Birch," the voice said. "You are finally awake!" the man then cheered.

Professor Birch had a pretty deep voice, which surprised the boy. Birch actually expected the boy to say something, but there was no answer.

"I guess you're still too shocked," Birch commented. "You were unconscious for six months after all".

"Six months?!" the boy thought, as some memories came back to him....

********************



The boy was standing on a boat, which seemed to had lost control. People were running and shouting everywhere.

"PEEEKOOO!!!!!!!!!!" an old man shouted as he climbed the stairs as fast as he could.

However, the boy didn't move. A loud crash was then heard and a voice came through the boat's speakers: "EVACUATE IMMEDIATLY!".

The boy still didn't move though, and before he could notice the crash made him fly towards a door, breaking it. The boy was left unconscious after that, but a girl who that had been near him the whole time saved him.

*********************

"Anyway, it's not that important if you don't talk now," Birch then continued. "I guess I'll explain you what is happening. But, first, let me hand you this," he said and gave the boy a sheet of paper.

"Hoenn explorers inscription sheet, the hell is this?" the boy thought as he read the first line of the paper.

"You may be confused now, but write your information there and I'll explain," Birch told the boy, apparently guessing what the boy was thinking.

"Name..."



"Age... 16, Place of origin... Kanto". Breden rapidly finished filling the sheet and then handed it back to Birch.

"Great, thanks," Birch said. "I'll explain this briefly. You, me, and a lot of other people were traveling on a boat from Kanto to Sinnoh... But it crashed here, in the Hoenn region. You were left unconscious after the crash, but a girl saved you".

Birch stood quiet for a second, waiting to see if Breden had something to say, but he didn't.

"Then, we escaped the boat thanks to some of the survivors' water Pokemon. But when we reached land we found something amazing," Birch continued. "We found a big city, Petalburg, but it was abandoned. Almost abandoned really, because there was a man called Norman living there. He helped us settling there. We then separated into groups to explore this region. We found more cities: Rustboro, Dewford, Slateport, Mauville... All of them almost abandoned too".

Breden still didn't talk, but his face showed he was confused by what Birch was saying.

"Anyway, this may be too much for you to take now, so come visit me at my laboratory," Birch said. "We are now on a truck heading towards Littleroot Town. The girl that saved you in the boat will be waiting for you," he finished.

Breden then fell asleep, it was too much information...

* A day later *



Breden woke up, but now it wasn't dark. Maybe they had arrived?

He decided to go out...



"I've been taking care of you, sorry if I act weirdly..." she explained.
"T-th-thanks..." Breden then said, having some trouble speaking.
"Don't worry!" she responded. "Now, come with me," she told Breden and entered the house that was next to them...



"Petalburg was full, so I decided to continue taking care of you here," the girl explained. "Norman of Petalburg also helped in watching after you. We called ourselves Mom and Dad, how silly!".

Breden didn't know what to respond, he was grateful but the girl seemed scary.



"But I think you met him already, his name is Professor Birch," she said.
"I-I've m-met him," Breden responded.
"He lives next door, you may want to visit him!" the girl then suggested.

Breden agreed and left the house. Littleroot was a very small town, so he easily found Birch's house. But Birch wasn't there, instead, he met...



...Birch's daughter.

"Are you Breden?" the girl asked, and Breden nodded. "My father has been talking about you all day, that you survived and all that crap".
"Wh-where is he?" Breden responded, ignoring her whining.
"I don't know," she answered. "You could search for him. That would make him happier than seeing me anyway".
"S-sure..." Breden replied and then left. That girl was scary.

Breden left the house and thought about entering the laboratory that was near him, but some shouts stopped him...



He could recognize the deep voice.



"Breden!" Birch shouted. "Grab one of the Pokemon there and save me!"

It was just a Zigzagoon, but Breden didn't hesitate and ran towards the bag...



Which one was he going to choose?

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Comments:
- Story starts being introduced. You can notice this has some influences from Lost, and it will continue to have some. But don't worry, the main plot won't be related to Lost at all, so this won't seem similar to Nuzlocke's comic.
- We also meet the main character, Breden. He seems quiet and a bit mysterious, different from my last protagonist.
- Also Birch and May appear. Man with PEEKO also does a small cameo.

On the next update: A fighter.

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Fireburn
Conqueror of the Rustboro Gym
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Joined: July 28th, 2010, 10:53 pm

July 22nd, 2011, 6:41 pm #2

I'll be watching. :v:

Also the title of your next update implies you'll be picking Torchic (Fire/Fighting), but maybe it's too obvious.
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Sylvie
Conqueror of the Dewford Gym
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Joined: November 18th, 2010, 3:33 am

July 22nd, 2011, 6:44 pm #4

A new adventure with a new protagonist...
And it looks like that accident did not affect Briney and PEEKO's love of sailing.
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Icy
Conqueror of the Azalea Gym
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Joined: November 30th, 2010, 9:34 pm

July 22nd, 2011, 7:08 pm #5

PEEEEEEEEKKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :v:

stalking following this.

also did you pick torchic?
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LLB
Conqueror of the Lavaridge Gym
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Joined: September 5th, 2010, 5:19 pm

July 22nd, 2011, 7:15 pm #6

HELL YES NEW EDGE RUN

This looks fairly awesome. I will be watching like a hawk.
eh
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Orcinus
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Joined: February 5th, 2011, 10:12 am

July 22nd, 2011, 7:16 pm #7

Yay, new Edge run! I bet you didn't pick Torchic, that's just kind of obvious, heh
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Zadikall
Conqueror of the Mauville Gym
Conqueror of the Mauville Gym
Joined: October 30th, 2010, 8:17 pm

July 22nd, 2011, 7:33 pm #8

Oh heck yes! ITS ON!!!

I was wating for this so badly... Dude, you're my idol on this forum :3:

No love for Treecko? Shiyt..
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charliemew2
Conqueror of the Eterna Gym
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Joined: February 15th, 2011, 11:25 pm

July 22nd, 2011, 7:34 pm #9

I don't care which he picks! It'll be awesome!

Although if you need a choice then Torchic all the way

Besides, Breden seems interesting so far and it will be fun to watch his character.

Watching this one Edge :D
Former mod for FCR, studying game design. no longer active.

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Kesha
Conqueror of the Hearthome Gym
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Joined: June 21st, 2011, 9:09 pm

July 22nd, 2011, 7:40 pm #10

Hope this'll be as good as your last one. Definitely watching this.
Flandre wrote:God all this whining, since when did the tumblr "pls dont triggr me" brigade join the forums.

Chill.
Read this run.
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Kaz
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Joined: May 29th, 2011, 5:31 pm

July 22nd, 2011, 7:50 pm #11

I kinda hope he picks Mudkip. I always liked them from the beginning.


So yeah, this seems cool, I'll be watchin'. I assume it's just a run of normal Emerald?
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Dennis? Arceus? I believe in Mr. Pokemon.
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Moti
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Joined: July 19th, 2010, 12:38 am

July 23rd, 2011, 1:01 am #12

Oh man, this will be great.
I like how this is completely irrelevant to your other story...

Following!
I don't really do Nuzlocke anymore. Might come back someday.
Don't count on it.
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darkraiku
Conqueror of the Fuchsia Gym
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Joined: June 15th, 2011, 1:17 am

July 23rd, 2011, 12:33 pm #13

This will be epic..
BTW Choose the KungFuChicken!

Raikou, the glitch pokemon 1000X cooler than missingno.

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AliJack
Conqueror of the Fuchsia Gym
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Joined: April 10th, 2011, 12:07 pm

July 23rd, 2011, 1:19 pm #14

TREECKO
Loser.
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Trollton
Conqueror of the Cerulean Gym
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Joined: April 29th, 2011, 1:30 am

July 24th, 2011, 1:47 am #15

im with darkraiku the KUNGFUCHICKEN is best

also...

OH MY GOD ITS A NEW RUN
WATCHIN
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Darth Mewtwo
Conqueror of the Fuchsia Gym
Conqueror of the Fuchsia Gym
Joined: July 11th, 2011, 3:42 pm

July 24th, 2011, 5:03 am #16

Go with the meme... you know who I mean...

Good luck
/watches
Current Run:
Regular (Plus fuck Audinos) Blacklocke
Deaths: 3 Badges: 1
AGAIN THIS MORNING ON THE SAME POKEMON WTF?!?!?!?
Past Runs:
Black Randomlocke (Unpublished) COMPLETE
Deaths: 8 Badges: 8

Mewtwo Solo COMPLETE
Deaths: 0 Badges: 8 Legends Killed: All


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Spidermimi
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Joined: June 26th, 2011, 4:22 pm

July 24th, 2011, 7:45 am #17

This is getting interesting... a lot of abandoned cities...

And I'm really wondering which starter you will choose.
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Chimaru
Conqueror of the Olivine Gym
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Joined: April 18th, 2011, 6:43 pm

July 24th, 2011, 10:29 am #18

Alrighty it's a new (Breden) run!
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How do you pronounce Breden?
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Steven_Nara
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
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Joined: January 25th, 2011, 2:15 am

July 24th, 2011, 2:30 pm #19

Alright 3 or more people say choose torchic, I say agreed.
I hope this is succesful.

Question: Has the run been completed already or just started?
My Nuzlockes/challenges
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1-5 complete (Note all challenges are done in my own DS and games. No hacks or computors used.)

(1) Steven's Emerald, (2) Steven's Platinum, (3) Eloise's Steven's Heartgold, (4) Matthew's White, (5) Steven's psychic monotype white run w/ Gaia the shiny Gigalith (Caught in Victory road )

(6) Kagemaru's Absol solo in platinum

(7) Matthew's Yellow nuzlocke run

(8) Kagemaru's Regigigas solo in Heartgold

(9) Kagemaru's Riolu solo in Diamond

(10) Steven's white 2 nuzlocke
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TheEdgeOfForever
Conqueror of the Sootopolis Gym
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Joined: April 10th, 2010, 12:51 am

July 24th, 2011, 6:59 pm #20

[+] Replies!
Steven_Nara wrote:Alright 3 or more people say choose torchic, I say agreed.
I hope this is succesful.

Question: Has the run been completed already or just started?
It has been started, I'm more advanced in the game than in the updates, but not by much.
Futachimaru wrote:Alrighty it's a new (Breden) run!
[+] Spoiler
How do you pronounce Breden?
I've no idea, I just like how the name looks.
Spidermimi wrote:This is getting interesting... a lot of abandoned cities...

And I'm really wondering which starter you will choose.
It's a fighter!
Darth Mewtwo wrote:Go with the meme... you know who I mean...

Good luck
/watches
We'll see who I pick...
ItzMeSilverBone wrote:im with darkraiku the KUNGFUCHICKEN is best

also...

OH MY GOD ITS A NEW RUN
WATCHIN
KungFuChicken? Maybe...
AliJack wrote:TREECKO
Or maybe this?
darkraiku wrote:This will be epic..
BTW Choose the KungFuChicken!
:v:
Moti wrote:Oh man, this will be great.
I like how this is completely irrelevant to your other story...

Following!
Yeah, completely new story!
Kaz wrote:I kinda hope he picks Mudkip. I always liked them from the beginning.


So yeah, this seems cool, I'll be watchin'. I assume it's just a run of normal Emerald?
Indeed, regular Emerald.
Kesha wrote:Hope this'll be as good as your last one. Definitely watching this.
Let's hope this is good.
charliemew2 wrote:I don't care which he picks! It'll be awesome!

Although if you need a choice then Torchic all the way

Besides, Breden seems interesting so far and it will be fun to watch his character.

Watching this one Edge :D
I don't actually need a choice ::P: Thanks for posting!
Zadikall wrote:Oh heck yes! ITS ON!!!

I was wating for this so badly... Dude, you're my idol on this forum :3:

No love for Treecko? Shiyt..
Thanks! No love for Treecko? Who knows.
Orcinus wrote:Yay, new Edge run! I bet you didn't pick Torchic, that's just kind of obvious, heh
Maybe it was intentional?
LLB wrote:HELL YES NEW EDGE RUN

This looks fairly awesome. I will be watching like a hawk.
Hawks watch runs?
Icy wrote:PEEEEEEEEKKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :v:

stalking following this.

also did you pick torchic?
I picked... (read update :v: )
Sylvie wrote:A new adventure with a new protagonist...
And it looks like that accident did not affect Briney and PEEKO's love of sailing.
Their love of sailing is infinite.
Haberdasher wrote:Watching this 'til the end. :3:
:3
Fireburn wrote:I'll be watching. :v:

Also the title of your next update implies you'll be picking Torchic (Fire/Fighting), but maybe it's too obvious.
Maybe...
Thanks for all the comments guys, makes me want to update faster!

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#2: A fighter


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A man was standing in the center of a ring, a crowd surrounding him.



"And now, for the main event!" the man announced. "The three-way match for the PWF champion title!" he shouted.

The crowd started shouting and applauding wildly as the music for the first battler started playing. It was a heavy metal tune, fast and aggressive.

"Our first contender, weighing 11 pounds..." the announcer started saying and the crowd turned even crazier. "...Mr. T!"

A Treecko, accompanied by his trainer, entered the ring. Mr. T was one of the most popular Pokemon of the Pokemon Wrestling Federation, and he knew it. His way of walking showed a lot of confidence and when he climbed onto the ring he started waving at the crowd. Some girls even fainted, he was just THAT popular.

The music then stopped and a second tune started. This was one was also heavy, but was very slow and violent. The crowd recognized the tune and started booing.

"Our second challenger, weighing 5.5 pounds..." the announcer said. "... the big red machine, Kane!" he shouted as two big columns of fire appeared from the ground.

A Torchic then entered the field. Unlike Mr. T, Kane was hated by the crowd, probably because it was very violent. Kane then climbed onto the ring and gave a menacing look at Mr. T. Kane and Mr. T had always been rivals.

A third tune then started. This one was very different, because it was very silly.

"And now, weighing 16.8 pounds..." the man announced. "... the PWF champion, M-Pak!" he shouted.

Now a Mudkip entered the field. M-Pak was strange, had a funny way of walking and looked a bit silly. Nobody knew how he was the champion...

"Trainers, you know the rules," the announcer then said. "Only physical attacks, no items and no external help. FIGHT!" the man finished and left the field.



"We meet again, Mr. T," Kane said, with an evil tone.
"I'm not interested in you, you're not the champion," Mr. T responded, completely ignoring him.
"Whatever, you won't say that when this match ends," Kane challenged.
"We'll see..." Mr. T replied.

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"Come on Breden, just pick one!" Birch shouted. He was starting to panic.

"S-s-sorry..." Breden responded and then picked one of the balls.

"I guess this one will do," he thought as he sent out a Pokemon...



"Finally free!" Mr. T said.
"You want to save this man?!" the Zigzagoon challenged.
"I actually don't care, but Mr. T doesn't refuse a challenge!" Mr. T answered.



"And that's what you get for messing with the great Mr. T!" Mr. T then mocked as the Zigzagoon fell defeated.



"Thanks Breden, that Zigzagoon was a beast," Birch said.

Breden didn't respond. In fact, he was actually frozen, apparently shocked.

"Are you okay?" Birch asked.
"D-d-did you h-hear that?" Breden answered.
"What, if you mean Treecko saying 'tree-treecko' then I did," Birch responded.

"Treecko didn't say that... I understood everything both Pokemon said..." Breden thought, still shocked.

"You know, I've been studying Pokemon for a long time," Birch then said. "And I'm sure that Treecko and Zigzagoon were saying very nice things to each other!".
"S-sure," Breden responded.
"Anyway, let's go to the lab," Birch then suggested.

* At the lab *



"As I was telling you yesterday, it seems this whole region is almost abandoned," Birch said. "Something odd must be happening here and we-".
"I'll join you," Breden interrupted. He was very intrigued by what was happening.
"That's great!" Birch responded. "You'll obviously need all the help you can get, so I'll give you the Treecko!".



"Thanks," Breden said.
"Not a problem," Birch responded. "Anyway, let me tell you something. You and me aren't the only explorers, my daughter May is helping us too!"

Breden didn't say anything.

"She's gone though, and I can't find her..." Birch continued.



"I'm not really sure," Breden answered with a scared tone.
"She doesn't bite!" Birch responded. "She probably isn't too far, so you'll find her easily. Now, go!".
"Bu-" Breden tried to say.
"GO!" Birch interrupted.

Breden had no choice so he left the lab.

However, he was curious about the fact that he had been able to understand Mr. T, so he decided to release Mr. T from the Pokeball...



"Now, how can I get this little guy to talk again..." Breden wondered. "I guess I'll try talking to him..."

"Mr. T!" Breden then shouted, grabbing the Treecko's attention.
"That's my name, don't waste it," Mr. T responded.
"Wait... You understood me?" Breden then asked, now even more confused.
"I... I actually did," Mr. T answered, getting confused too. Breden freaked out and called Mr. T back to his Pokeball.

"I can talk to them?!" Breden asked himself. "This region and me were meant to meet each other..."

Breden then exited Littleroot Town, he had to look for May after all.



And after some walking, he found her.

"May," he said.
"It's you again," May responded with a disappointed tone.
"Your father sent me here," Breden explained.
"My fa-" May answered but suddenly stopped when she noticed Breden was holding a Pokeball.



"He didn't need to do that," May said. "He only needed ME!" she then shouted.
"C-c-calm down," Breden responded, scared.
"No!" May replied. "This has gone too far, you're going down!" she shouted again, grabbing a Pokeball.



"My father only needs one assistant, not two!" May said.
"I guess I can't avoid this," Breden responded, grabbing Mr. T's Pokeball.



"Kane?!" Mr. T shouted.
"We meet again, Mr. T," Kane then said, as usual. "Thought you had got rid of me?"

****************************

M-Pak, Kane and Mr. T were still fighting for the championship. The three wanted to win, and they kept attacking.

Until one of them fainted...



... M-Pak.

"It's just you and me, Mr. T," Kane said. He had knocked out M-Pak with a strong kick.
"Just how you wanted it to happen," Mr. T responded. "But I'll win!"

Mr. T then charged towards Kane with incredible speed, but before he could hit, the Torchic jumped and prepared a strong kick. Both Pokemon then crashed and fell to the ground.

But one of them stood up...



... Mr. T.

"And the NEW PWF champion is..." the announcer said, carrying a belt. "Mr. T!" he finished, as the crowd went wild.

**************************

"I still don't forget that battle," Kane said in a very angry tone.
"Not my fault that you are weak," Mr. T mocked.
"Mock me all you want idiot," Kane responded. "But the rules here are different," Kane challenged as a ball of fire formed in its mouth.
"What?!" Mr. T shouted, now scared.
"Say goodbye!" Kane shouted as he tried to launch the ball of fire. However, he couldn't control it and his attack was worthless.



"You're pathetic," Mr. T mocked as Kane fell defeated.



"Really?" Breden asked.
"No, I was being ironic," May responded. "Anyway, I'll have my revenge. I guess we can go to the lab now" she said and left towards Littleroot.

Breden followed her.

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Comments:
- It was Treecko!
- So we meet two new characters, Mr. T and Kane. Hope you liked their backstory, since more of it will be revealed later.
- Also, more stuff about Breden. He can talk to Pokemon but apparently the rest of the people can't.

On the next update: #3: The big fan.

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