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[INACTIVE]Tenrai's World By Storm! A White Blind Run

Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 17th, 2011, 11:15 pm #1

Havn't seen a white run untill recently so here goes. I've never played white before so I think I may struggle..
Rules
1. If a Pokemon Faints It must be Released
2. One Pokemon Per Route
3. Dupes Aren't allowed but Cant re-catch another
4. All must be Nicknamed





Chapter 1
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5

So yeah Please Enjoy, comment and Give tips for improvement ^_^
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Henshin A Bro Bro
Conqueror of the Mahogany Gym
Conqueror of the Mahogany Gym
Joined: January 9th, 2011, 7:51 pm

January 18th, 2011, 12:01 am #2

'The Curse of Nuzlocke' Interesting aproach
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 18th, 2011, 12:05 am #3

I think Someone else thought of it first, I just thought the idea was Great so kinda borrowed it, how else do you explain how yours die while other faint.
But thanks for the compliment
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Henshin A Bro Bro
Conqueror of the Mahogany Gym
Conqueror of the Mahogany Gym
Joined: January 9th, 2011, 7:51 pm

January 18th, 2011, 12:09 am #4

It's cool to start out leaning on others ideas, but try to wean yourself away from that in the future.
I like the art style, but maybe work alittle on proportions. Other than that a nice start.
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 18th, 2011, 12:16 am #5

Well that's the only Thing i intended to borrow =P
And yeah..proportions...My nemesis...
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 18th, 2011, 1:38 am #6

Will Update tommorrow about 5pm GMT.
SLEEP NOW =3
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 19th, 2011, 12:35 am #7

Chapter 2 Done, I accidently deleted all of this, I'm glad I did this looks so much better than the original.
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Comments, Advice and Criticism all Welcome.

The Story Will becoming in next Chapter having Played through the game now
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Mastachaos
Conqueror of the Saffron Gym
Conqueror of the Saffron Gym
Joined: December 18th, 2010, 3:16 am

January 19th, 2011, 5:53 am #8

Vastly interesting, the style and effect have made me a follower.
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 19th, 2011, 1:33 pm #9

Why Thank You, Next update may take a while (2 days at most =P) As new charcters are scary to draw
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 25th, 2011, 9:14 pm #10

Part 3
I doubt anyone's going to comment until lit gets interesting but still Enjoy =3
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ShiroInu
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: November 1st, 2010, 11:59 pm

January 29th, 2011, 9:16 am #11

I suppose I should stop lurking and comment, since your run looks so lonely on this page. Your art is good, and I can tell you've thought about the plot. Just keep working at it, and I'm sure you'll pull in lots of readers.

Shiro's Trial: a Nuzlocke Adventure in Kanto; Part 36a - February 28/2018
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LLB
Conqueror of the Lavaridge Gym
Conqueror of the Lavaridge Gym
Joined: September 5th, 2010, 5:19 pm

January 30th, 2011, 1:48 pm #12

Haha, this is really good so far.
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Plus I know everything that happens thanks to POL :coolface:
eh
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 31st, 2011, 7:47 pm #13

UPDATE TIEM
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I decided to stop colour as It was taking ages and i felt like it took away from the Art. I think i will use Colour on the BIG fights. Your thoughts?
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 31st, 2011, 7:51 pm #15

2 levels Ahead,
Plus when your minezumi is clearly on Steroids things so smoother.
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schneeblefish
Conqueror of the Petalburg Gym
Conqueror of the Petalburg Gym
Joined: September 5th, 2010, 11:50 am

January 31st, 2011, 7:55 pm #16

Well, having N nuzlocking too is an old idea, but it works and I think this is the first time I've seen it in a comic. I'll be watching.
Banner courtesy of Kynim, avatar of MrGregor.

Q&A BONUS CHAPTER (27/6/12)
Death count = 7
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Richard's pok?mon:
/ / / / /
Atlanta / Ace / Hermes / Lil' Jo / Ramiel / Orpheus

Kathryn's pok?mon:
/ / / / /
Frederick / Amelia / Aidan / Evie / Max / Lilly
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 31st, 2011, 8:00 pm #17

Well he Clearly Is. Now i've completed it
He Never uses the same Pokemon..Not Once =|
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Tempest
Conqueror of the Violet Gym
Conqueror of the Violet Gym
Joined: August 15th, 2010, 6:39 pm

January 31st, 2011, 8:31 pm #18

^ true enough, a perfect reason, also like your art.
Currently: Challenging the Titan's of the Pokemon World in my HG Nuzlocke Run!
Team:
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Tensai (Cyndaquil, LVL 12), Raoh (Geodude, LVL 10), Baiken (Mareep, LVL 7)
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

January 31st, 2011, 8:43 pm #19

Thank you very, Much means alot to my low confidence =3
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Tenrai
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

March 2nd, 2011, 2:48 am #20

UPDATE TIME
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I Know it's taken ages for me to update i had lots of personal reason.
Anyway Enjoy, And any hints
Also for anyone getting B/W. I'm not Joking, I grinded Dante 4 levels and I was so Over powered it was unreal.
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