hikage clan

dunnsavo
Elite Jounin
Joined: October 13th, 2011, 10:12 pm

October 15th, 2011, 4:19 am #1

Clan Name: -Hikage Clan--
Village of Occupancy: --Easy traveling distance south of the dark forest in the land of tea and north of the Capital. The Shade village is small village along the railroad. Mostly populated by the Hikage clan members this is not a ninja village and acts as a rest stop for traveling traders who need .restock their supplies before entering either the dark forest or toward the capital city.--
Clan Leader: --Kaminoke Hikage (the 50 year out patriarch or the clan who specializes in light absorption techniques) --
Ability/Hidden Technique: --Shadow Void Walk--

Clan Functions & Description: --The Hikage clans power stems from a deal made with what to the best of their understanding was a demon of some sort. This deal was between the founder of the clan Hikanoko Hikage and some sort of extra-dimensional being who appear to him 1000 years ago while he was attempting to traverse the dark forest. Only he and the being know for sure as to the conditions of the deal but most speculate that it may be the explanation of the inability of any clan member to die out side of battle.

After his encounter with the entity in the forest Hikanoko be to notice that light seemed to dim where ever he went. Furthermore he only ever truly felt comfortable in the shade. But these effects did not seem to add up to much of an ability until he was one day running out on a bill at a café trying to escape the owner . He duck it into a shady alley which turned out to be a dead end, needing to escape the man wielding a very sharp kitchen knife, Hikanoko thought to himself I wish I could disappear and suddenly he was no longer where had just stood. Instead he found himself in the middle of a massive field as far as the eye could see. After hours of exploring the time of day never seemed to change and was stuck in a constant state of twilight . With every step he felt more and more at home until he could not imagine ever leaving until he thought his wife. This brought him back to the portal that he came in the walked through it and right in to the his home village thousands of miles away. Over the next 40 year and through much practice he became one of the greatest ninja of his age and developed Kageton or Shadow release Then on his 60 birthday be became unable to resist the urge to return to the Twilight realm and upon entering his portal immediately crumbled behind him trapping him in the twilight realm where he resides to this day. Acting as the head of the counsel of elders who are charged with the educating the youth which are trained at the academy hidden through the shadows which is located within the twilight realm as all Kageton are more easily preformed in that realm, the legacy that Hikanoko has left in Earth realm can still be felt except most do not know his clan even exists.
The fact that the Hikage does not technically belong to a village has recently caused trouble for the Hikage Clan. So in response the Clan created a temporarily alliance with Konohagakure in order to avoid trouble. In exchange for providing basic training for the youth of the Hikage, the clan has promised to assistance to the village in any nonmilitary action including supplies movement and quickening trade routes. The Hikage ninjas are however not members of Konohagakure and thus not under the jurisdiction of the hokage. After Graduating from the Konohagakure academy the Hikage children are sent back to their clan in order to enter the Hikage Academy in the Twilight Realm. --

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Kekkai Genkai/Hidden Technique Description: --: the shadow void walk is broken into two parts the first being a passive ability to absorb the light around them this absorbed light is converted into energy to fuel the body and to replenish chakra the amount of absorbed light would cause the areas within a 10 radius to be equivalent to an over cast day on the most sunny days and at night on new moons almost complete darkness. Second it provides an active ability to use shadow and shade as a portal to a separate dimension. This portal always lead to the same place for each individual so if the realm is entered the user always arrive at its own individual point from which he most leave. These points are called shadow gates and each member of the clan has their own unique gate which is a highly guarded secret told to no one as the gates are destructible from the twilight realm. This dimension can be exited into any shadow or shaded area within 20 feet or back to the Hikage home village, but entering and exiting can be done it rapid almost instantaneous succession to move over great distances quickly. Void walk users may stay within the twilight realm indefinitely. Furthermore due to the deal made with the shadow demon Hikage members are unable to die out side of battle. Meaning that they have to be actively killed in a fight or attack where at least one party aims to injure the other. Poisons will not kill a Hikage they only bring the poisoned character closer and closer to a death that never comes, furthermore antidote to poison must be administered within the same amount of time it would normal take a person to die after which the effects are irreversible. To a point that they are as good as dead but can never actually expire and must suffer for all eternity. Once the age of 60 they are compelled to enter into the twilight zone which they are never able to leave as their personal shadow gate is eliminated here they remain for eternity or until the demon finally reveal his reason for keeping them alive.--

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Additional Hidden Techniques / Supporting Techniques:

1. --Shadow summoning justsu.--
Rank: -- D--
Distance: -- Close Range--
Description: -- the user absorbs the light around them creating a darkened region. The level of darkness and area or effect are both dependent on b brightness of the environment and the length of time the effect lasts. The longer the time the smaller the area that the justsu effects. A single person sized area can form instantly after the justsu is preformed. Light absorbed is nearly equivalent to the amount used to use the justsu so charkra loss is negligible--

2. --Entrance Stage Shadow--
Rank: -C--
Distance: --Self.--
Description: -- the user insert their hand into a shadow y surface and pulls out items he has stored near his shadow gate, such as weapons, explosives, medical supplies and even food. --

3. --Black Out Barrage .--
Rank: --C--
Distance: -- Mid Range.10 yards--
Description: --user force opponent to believe that they have lost their sense of sight and the postion in relation to other objects. Lasts for 1 minute in rp or 2 posts or until user enter twilight realm. Must have made eye contact with target --

4. --In My Fathers Shadow --
Rank: -- A--
Distance: --Self--
Description: --user invokes their ancestors for assistance siphoning some of their chakra into themselves refilling the charkara to one quarter of the max amount the once a day or taking in the experience of their ancestors to gain improved chakra control. This justus may only be activated while standing in shadow. --

5. --Dark Side of the Moon--
Rank: -- S.--
Distance: --Long Range. must be use 96100 km 75 cm away from the users --
Description: --users summon a mini shadow moon roughly 1/8 the size of the actually moon from the twilight dimension setting it into the required orbit and orbit speed. This result in a solar eclipse that last 15 minutes or thirty total posts after which point it automatically is unsummoned. The moon has no gravitational pull and does not affect the tides nor gravity in any way. Must be performed by 5 player members of the clan at once they have to all be in the earth realm also every one of the 5 user exhaust their excess charkra and is not longer able to form any justsus for 30 posts--

6. --Multi- Shadow clone Imitation.--
Rank: -A--
Distance: -Long Range. 100 yards--
Description: --user cause opponent to see you create a massive number of clones none of which actually exist lasts for 2 minute 4 posts from the affected player or until the user enters the twilight realm. The effected character feels all the hits the fake clone inflict but is not actually dealt any damage--
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Terran Lockheart
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Joined: July 9th, 2009, 11:16 pm

October 15th, 2011, 5:54 pm #2

All right, two big things before anything elses stands out to me.

Thing One: Please add the proper code to this. I know some ported things from the deletion scare have messed up coding, but this was not effected by that, so please fix it.

Thing two: You are making something from a minor village, and a custom minor village at that. Here on NVRP you can not make a character from a minor country or a missing nin of any level untill a character has been made in one of the five major villages.
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Nara, Tsuki - Konoha Academy Student
Makoto, Sado - Konoha Chuunin
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Soshi, Maikeru - Suna Legendary/Clan Head/Kage Advisor
Akkitakai, Terra - Suna Chuunin/Medic
Tomoshibi, Kenja - Suna Academy Student
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Rakurai, Kirai - Kiri Jounin/Seven Swordsmen
Kekkeishi, Xion - Kiri ANBU/Kiri Seeds
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Tenma, Azazel - Kumo Raikage
Teijin, Myoushu - Kumo Ex Raikage
Kousen, Xealchim - Kumo Jounin/Hunter
Kousen, Gaiden - Kumo Genin
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Yama, Heni - Iwa Tokubetsu/Medic
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Kyuhi, Mizore - S rank Nuknin
Roxas - S rank Wandering
Kairii - S rank Wandering
Kedemono, Nero- S rank nuknin
Lockheart, Koji - S rank Nuknin
Kesshi - C rank Wandering
Lockheart, Terran- Hoshi ANBU
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dunnsavo
Elite Jounin
Joined: October 13th, 2011, 10:12 pm

October 15th, 2011, 6:07 pm #3

thanks terran
i was not aware of the rule and i will re code the clan now
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dunnsavo
Elite Jounin
Joined: October 13th, 2011, 10:12 pm

October 15th, 2011, 7:13 pm #4

my first set of edits is compleat
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Katsumi
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Joined: June 20th, 2009, 11:30 pm

October 15th, 2011, 8:39 pm #5

Personally, I'm still a little confised as to how "In my father's shadow" works.

So are you using an A Rank to get back half of your chakra pool?

If so, then that's overpowered.

I'm still iffy about the moon thing. There have to be ways to plunge an area in shadow besides causing a solar eclipse. Personally, I would recommend that you make them all have to be PCs, and preferrably on earth. Also, why not just make it simpler, and make it a "shadow moon" or something. That way you won't have to deal with the physics questions of it not effecting anything even though you just summoned another moon.

That's it for now.

Have a nice day! :)
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dunnsavo
Elite Jounin
Joined: October 13th, 2011, 10:12 pm

October 15th, 2011, 8:48 pm #6

will fix the mana restoration and rethink the moon thing you're right there must be another way do think think causing a massive cloud formation to block the sun would be less abusive and would be reducing the mana restoration to 1/4 be enough to make it a rank
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Katsumi
Legendary Ninja
Joined: June 20th, 2009, 11:30 pm

October 16th, 2011, 12:00 am #7

Looks fine to me.
Congratulations!

Your clan has received its
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