Bardic Muse.--- Catena Rondo.

Divena
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September 11th, 2013, 2:46 pm #1


 Bardic Muse.--- Catena  Rondo.

Harken to a bards heartfelt compassion
He speaketh sweet words of love divine
Sups from a chalice fruits from the vine
Harken to a bards heartfelt compassion.

He speaketh sweet words of love divine
Upon natures fantasy shall not be denied
So deep the muse his words have applied
He speaketh sweet words of love divine.

Upon natures fantasy shall not be denied
Time through the ages hath proven to be
For his poetical muse shalt ever be free
Upon natures fantasy shall not be denied.

Time through the ages hath proven to be
An understanding to those within feeling
As deep inner thoughts become revealing
Time through the ages hath proven to be.

An understanding to those within feeling
Harken to a bards heartfelt compassion
love thro`the ages shall ever be fashion
An understanding to those within feeling.

Harken to a bards heartfelt compassion
He speaketh sweet words of love divine
Sups from a chalice fruits from the vine
Harken to a bards heartfelt compassion.

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cusick
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September 12th, 2013, 12:36 pm #2

Enchanting  and the music divine Divena
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September 12th, 2013, 7:02 pm #3

Thankyou Maggie, pleased you liked this one, Dahm The Bard is a favourite of mine, love his songs and music, hugs from Divena.
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September 13th, 2013, 1:37 am #4

Very cool! And I like the music as well. Now if I knew anything at all about form poetry, perhaps I could comment more topically.
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September 13th, 2013, 6:04 am #5

Gorgeous Di, I think this is your best ever.
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September 13th, 2013, 2:17 pm #6

Thankyou Wild flower, I enjoy the challenge of writing in form, pleased you liked this one, hugs from Divena.
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September 13th, 2013, 2:19 pm #7

Thankyou Terry for your kind words.`tis what makes it all worth while, hugs from Di.
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July 4th, 2018, 8:24 pm #8

~ this is an impressive poetic form

And I can image that it would be challenging to get it to flow well...
I thoroughly enjoyed this read, Divination

I hope this finds you well

Love and light
Sash xo
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