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Carlantis07
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9:32 AM - Jul 13, 2009 #1

ok number one

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Darkray
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9:58 AM - Jul 13, 2009 #2

i don't get it? who's the good side and whos the bad side?
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Carlantis07
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12:07 PM - Jul 13, 2009 #3

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Denning Rosewater
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1:30 AM - Jul 14, 2009 #4

Awful.
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Carlantis07
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10:44 AM - Jul 22, 2009 #5

@dening:it isn't awful its just the begining
@Darkray: mabey this will help
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2:17 AM - Jul 23, 2009 #6

Not bad... The actual comics need to tell the story though, not those character descriptions.
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Carlantis07
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10:23 AM - Jul 23, 2009 #7

Isaac i know im getting into more depth with it now
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8:11 PM - Jul 23, 2009 #8

Still not quite getting it. I would put narration in there somewhere. Sorry I didn't mention that earlier.
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9:00 PM - Jul 23, 2009 #9

listen isaac this is a complex story that where the present will interloop with the past which in turn will interloop with the future
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10:00 PM - Jul 23, 2009 #10

As long as it makes sense, then it is fine. As of now, I am not seeing any plot or any sort of story right now.

That's all I'm trying to say. You don't have to listen to me if you don't want to.
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12:06 AM - Jul 24, 2009 #11

carlantis25 @ Jul 23 2009, 02:00 PM wrote: listen isaac this is a complex story that where the present will interloop with the past which in turn will interloop with the future
I don't know whether to flame or laugh

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Dark Overbro Zack
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6:46 AM - Jul 24, 2009 #12

It's a bit hard to follow
this is a complex story that where the present will interloop with the past which in turn will interloop with the future
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Carlantis07
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11:04 AM - Jul 28, 2009 #13

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6:12 PM - Jul 28, 2009 #14

Although it makes a bit of sense there are quite a few things that this comic should have explained, but did not.

Why is the red team trying to kill the White Lions?

Why does that Assassin want Carl's sword?

How does Carl shoot freaking LAZOR BEAMS!?

And why are the White Lions attacking a castle? It takes more than a handful of soldiers to take a castle, too, BTW.

The comic doesn't really have any sense of flow or story. It's just... things happening and hardly being explained.
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Carlantis07
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10:42 AM - Jul 29, 2009 #15

this should clear things up
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