Vurn
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2:21 AM - Jul 30, 2009 #16

Ok, now it's clearing up a bit.
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Carlantis07
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11:02 AM - Jul 30, 2009 #17

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Darkray
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11:56 PM - Jul 30, 2009 #18

okay it's starting to get better
Darkray has spelling impairment.
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7:28 PM - Jul 31, 2009 #19


and the story advances i need a custom sheet for lord Xekfer can any one contribute a king class sprite sheet
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blizzard-blast7
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9:40 AM - Aug 03, 2009 #20

the story is evolving and although none of the characters have names except you whats up with that
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9:43 AM - Aug 03, 2009 #21

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Exxucus
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7:43 PM - Aug 03, 2009 #22

WHAT? WHAT? PUMPKIN WHAT?

I'm totally lost. What was the Wyvern doing?

Why is Bramimmond suddenly a mamkute?

Why is Idoun suddenly not a mamkute?

Why is everyone's dialogue so flat and lifeless?

Why are you trying to convey a complex (and I use that term lightly) story in a comic strip, something better suited for "ba-dum-tish" puns?

EDIT: Looking back the very end did have a bit of the good old stupid humor, so don't take my comments pertaining to that too seriously.
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Dark Overbro Zack
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8:58 PM - Aug 03, 2009 #23

not to be rude but this was funny.

FEED MEH

GOD DAMN MAN, YOU ALREADY ATE ROY PISS OFF
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3:07 PM - Aug 04, 2009 #24

ok now my comics will resume but im facing some problems I need a sprite for lord Xekfer and also i need more characters any one want to contribute lord xekfer needs a battle sheet and any character contributions need a battle sheet and a mug. if any one has a contribution send it to me at Carlwilliams2525@yahoo.com
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6:31 PM - Aug 04, 2009 #25

Dark Overlord Zack @ Aug 3 2009, 01:58 PM wrote: not to be rude but this was funny.

FEED MEH

GOD DAMN MAN, YOU ALREADY ATE ROY PISS OFF
I'm glad I'm not the only person who though so <_<

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12:51 AM - Aug 05, 2009 #26

*rage*

Okay, I've been a real storyline Nazi back in my RPG game making days, and this is by far the worst story I've encountered.

first off, what is the storyline? At least post a summary of what is happening and what will happen further on. I've picked up nothing except some horribly-rendered blood and some decent sprites going at it in random boughts of bloodshed.

Second, I think either Zeph or Exxy stated this, but the dialogue is too, well, horrid. The wording make me want to stab my cat in the stomach, while the sub-par grammar make me want to go even further and murder myself.

Also, only a few people have names. nobody else has been introduced.

The structure is killing my eyes. There's no narration or captions, and the horrid excuse for a storyline is thrown around because of this.

There's my opinion - love it or fuck it.

Credits go to Tygr and me for the sig.

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11:05 AM - Aug 14, 2009 #27

and the epic begins
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Lucille
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11:50 AM - Aug 14, 2009 #28

I'm confused.
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Darkray
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11:51 AM - Aug 14, 2009 #29

cool very thats a really good thing you got goin there :D
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12:08 PM - Aug 14, 2009 #30

...The hell?
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