You were expecting the next J.R.R Tolken from a 15 year old? Well DUH its not exactly the best writting, its not SUPPOSED to be. This is on ly the rough copy, i was just putting this section up if people liked it or not.
No, but if you're taking on a project this grandiose and you have as much free time as you say, at least check your style. If you don't, you're going to spend as much time polishing it as you did writing it.
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Yeah chances are you are probably very right. I know it starts out better but people who have read it said that it actually gets better, the style at least, as it goes on. Anyways, now with school starting i wount be able to work nearly as often as i would like to on it.
Thanks for advice though, i am taking a class on creative writting, we'll see if i stay awake for it :-D
Thanks for advice though, i am taking a class on creative writting, we'll see if i stay awake for it :-D
I tried to read "The Elements Of Style" to myself. I really tried...I think I got thru the first paragraph...then I fell asleep ![]()
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It exsists!!!
http://www.tokyopia.com/articles.asp?ar ... 72,00.htmlIt exsists!!!
